I read one of the news wriiten by Victoria Joy, heading "A-List Celebrity Beauty". The author used a really extractive sentence to attract readers' attention for further reading. "We’ve tracked down the latest and greatest beauty and skincare innovations from around the world and asked the people in the know why they’re so fantastic." By quoting this in the story will attract the readers follow your story to find out what is the secret of beauty of those celebrities.
Through out the news, she talked about eye lashes from China, the ultimate formular of fresh and ageless complexion from Milan, hair treatment from London and gelish nail formula from LA. In my opinion, it was an interesting article to read as the writer wrote about the latest news of beauty and skincare innovation from different countries. The writer gave a picture with a short caption of each country she wrote. It was easy to read with the link that we can have a detail look for the particular products or innovative news. Also, she also gave an example of the celebritites who have tried the products before. A price and descriptions of the beauty services which made the readers more clear and interested in finding more about them.
Sources: http://showbiz.sky.com/a-list-beauty-secrets


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