She links her story with the shop called "The Little Hair Shoppe" by introducing the products to the readers. Despite of the problem we faced in the summer, she also demostrated the way that we can style our hair differently and how it matches with other accessories.
Most importantly, the author put in some interlinks through out her stories which allows us to know more details about the products and other informations that we need to find. Pictures made the stories more interesting to read and clear on how are we interpreting the news. I found that she can deliver the message to us effectively by her clear structure, simple and life-related. Also, i found that 'sharing of beauty products' and some advice from, say make-up artist or stylist is very important for writing a beauty news. It can convey what the author wants to point out more efficiently.
At last, Dayna mentioned the phone number, address and the website to us for reference.
I am going to try to follow her steps and make it myself.
Have a look and see if u think that's work or not XP
Source:http://www.beautynewsnyc.com/in-this-issue/the-hazy-hair-days-of-summertricks-on-how-to-beat-the-heat-keep-your-hair-neat-from-the-little-hair-shoppe/#more-22141



it looks gd :P
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